Lyric for My Song...!!! Feel Free to Comment^^

Well, kali ini gw mau rada OOT lagi nih. Bingung soalnya mo posting apa lagi tentang Yu-Gi-Oh.. Oh iya, liburan ini, gw bikin lirik buat nanti kalo band gw mo bikin lagu. Nih liriknya:

Reform the World
By: Kazuya Akamaru

I look over the corrupted, broken world
where peoples deceiving each other.
Deceive to live, never think of others.

Why all these things exist?
Is it all the divine decree, letting the world with a broken chassis?

I wanna create my own world with U
without all that sorrowness
with peoples deceiving no more.

I look over the rotten world, once more
where peoples there live so greedy.
Greed and lust, nothing hampering.

Why all those things exist?
Is it all just our damned fate, screaming all that nobody wanna hear?

I wanna create my own world with U
without all that illusion
with prevarication no more.

So let us play the punishment games today
bringing all those bad things down
let the dazzling light to be gone

vanishing sinners, destroy the corrupted
and making a brand new world,
replacing our rotten and vile one...



Bagus ga? Kok kalo menurut gw rada aneh yah?
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Thx 4 yer attention.